Someday
somewhere sometime I lost my heart to u.
Not
only my heart, my soul and my being too,
Someday
sometime I lost myself in you
Falling
free was never so good.
Someday
somewhere I knew you were mine,
Someday
somewhere I never cared about time.
Days
and nights were spend in your thoughts,
Can
I ever explain the joys they brought?
Someday
somewhere, it did feel right,
Though
unprepared, I knew I will fight,
I would
fight to keep you by my side.
Never
did I know that time will turn tide.
Someday
sometime, time stood still,
My
life waited for the command of my will,
For
with you neither my past mattered
Nor
I cared about future. I lived in the present.
Today
now and here I sit thinking
How
you happened to me
Someday
somewhere sometime…
Seems
a lifetime ago, another life ago.
well composed in 5 stanzas ...!! But what I felt ,somewhr it is lacking d typical crispy-ness & dat buttery flow which z ur signature style..!! dat heart-melting poise is somwht missing. 9/10
ReplyDeletewill try to write better.... thank u fr ur suggestion :)
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ReplyDeleteNice , awsome bt need to devlop wording,
ReplyDeleteUse phrases it will gv more sense to the lines.